Fate's Path

Fate's Path

A Poem by ..R.I.P..

Let's break my spirit one more time
Shatter my dreams until I'm blind
Can't seem to catch a break
Always making a mistake

Losing my hope
Stuck in a sinking boat
Nowhere to run
Can't even see the sun

Everyone is wearing a mask
I'm surrounded by a lying mass
I'm lost in a world of hate
Following a path laid out by fate

© 2011 ..R.I.P..


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I love this piece. Well done. Keep writing! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago
I really like the rhyming in this...it really makes the poem flow nicely. Very nice imagery added throughout this piece. Great job.

Posted 14 Years Ago

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Added on February 10, 2011
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I have another account on here. I had lost my login stuff for this one and had set up a new one. Then found the stuff to this one. Anyways..follow me on Tumblr! I keep all my new poems on there! I'll .. more..