Sidelines

I'm stuck on the sidelines

Watching the show

Balling my eyes out

With nowhere to go

Lights go down

I'm watching you

Everywhere I look

There's someone new

You disappear

I freak out

Don't know what to do

Other than pout

Time stands still

As a figure draws near

A chill runs down my spine

I'm shaking with fear

A knife is pulled

Light bounces off the blade

My life is ending

A debt has been paid

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

What I like about this is it takes you to a single person,
sort of like a music video and the image is just of a girl in a hoodie just sort of waiting, hoping, seeing, waiting to kick someone in the nuts.


that is what I took away from it and liked it for that reasoning, brutal honesty with a crack to the knee.



Nice job.

Whiskey is on Whiskurz cause he is cool like that.

[Whiskurz]

I love your sense of rhyme and flow.....Great piece.....Whisk