⁓ A Forsaken Love ⁓

- And An Abandoned Me -

Within our fantasy realm,
Where dreams decided,

I follow your elusive stream,

A path you defined.

Darkness descends,
Veiling our mutual desire's mind,

As whispers of abandonment,
Kindle an icy fire.

We waltz upon
The edges of forsaken lands,

Where shadows dance
In the shifting sands.

Lamenting echoes
Haunt our every embrace,

Lost in a maze
Of love's abandoned grace.

In solitude's grip,
We waltz through despair,

Bearing the weight of dreams,
Too heavy to bear.

..

AEIOU-Ja..

Reviews

[Tumi]

i so much love your diction and flow of words every line was as majestic as hell

[S Jack JA]

Hi, Tomi. I greatly appreciate your kind comment on my piece. English is not my mother language, and I spent a lot of time carving and refining it before feeling confident enough to share it on WritersCafe. Your comment truly motivates me to keep working on my writing. Thank you so much!

[Tumi]

You are so much welcome
your writings are really special to be honest

[S Jack JA]

I will take it as a gentle push to motivate me to improve my writing. Thanks! ^_^