Below Freezing

A haiku about the Orlando club shooting.

Acceptance is rare.

They're frozen by the bullet,

we can help them thaw.

Author's Note

I will gladly take advice on tweaking it. Feel free to comment!

Reviews

[Tatum]

This is so sad, but I love how you compared the shooting to the people frozen by the bullet. Once again another one of your great pieces of writing.

[FJ Davis]

Starkly descriptive sentiments.
Well makes the point!