Love Me

So I Can Feel It Again.

"Don't open this until you get home

 only when you are alone and don't cry.

     'I'm already crying for you'

 She looked so lost when i hugged her

 and when i stepped back....i lost my soul.

     'With the breath of sorrow'

 As i turned around she asked me the words...

     

     'Why won't you love me?'

 

 With the wind i stopped and turned to say...

 

     'Your heart...it's to beautiful for me'

 The moment of release was not so easy.

     'So it's not your fault and i do love you' 

 

 For the letter from the doctors office read...

     'We are sorry but you have cancer'

 I left love standing still with no words

 only with a grip on what was and will always be."

  

   

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

So much said in this poem. Beauty and sorrow

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautifullly written, packed with emotion. Well done Poet

[Kesha]

Wow, short and so heartbreakingly sad. It tells a story that many people live and experience nowadays. Such a great piece really.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Oh wow... So beautiful and sad. You've woven a wonderful story into this piece that brings a new depth to it. Great job!
God bless