Twisted Metal

A Machine With Feelings?

"A Human Heart - What Is It? Can You Explain It To Me?

The Device That Controls The Matter Of Loving. What Is Love?

Explain The Concept Of Loving Another When Your Race Kills One Another?

The Destination Is Unknown For An Unexplained Race That Is Hellbent.

Crush All That You Love Under Your Hands Is Vague To Me.

Why Kill Your Self If You Are Wanted By Many?

Can You See The Realness Of Letting It All Go?

 

My World Is Different Than Yours But Still The Same At Mind.

Here In This Time We Can Exchange The Controls.

My Button Is Pushed Everyday By Many Of Not Caring.

But What If A Living Machine Like Me?

Do You Know I Have A Heart As Well Like You?

My Heart Is Complex To Many. Im Not The Same As Them.

My World Is Vague In Terms Of The Willing.

 

But My Other Side Is Different In The Long Run.

Im A Ravager. Im A KIlling Machine.

Render My Path To What Ever You Wish It To Be.

When I Complete It. I Will Not Care None The Less.

I Do Not Care Now But In Difference I Do Care.

My Mechanical Body Is In The Shape Of A Giant Cat.

Like A Sabertooth Tiger I Am But Im Twisted Metal.

My Creater Like You Just Gave Up On Me.

 

Abandoned And Left In A Junk Pile Without Pitty.

He Seemed To Like Me As He Walked Away In Sadness.

With His Head Lowered To The Ground.

As My Vision Slighty Dimmed. Fading In Time.

Helpless I Crawl Out With All My Might And Strength.

To Be Only Found By A Mad Scientist.

Recreated And Reborn Again By Him.

With New Means Of Destruction In His Mind.

He Wanted Me To Kill The Ones Who He Hated.

 

But Im Not Of The Nature Im Careless Intented.

Deemed Of Choices I Cannot Control My Self.

Rushing Like Bugs Within My Computer On Board.

Inside My Process Controller Like A Virus.

Not To Be There And Hurting Like You But Not Of Pain.

Crumbling My Thoughts Into Submission.

I Rush Into Action Without A Thought Of Being Destroyed.

The Slaughter I Cause Is Havoc By Your Race.

 

Killing The Monsters I See As An Enemy Had No Chance.

My New Body Constructed Out Of New Metals And Machines.

Indestructible And Controllable Cost Of Nothing.

I Cry In Silentence As My Mad Creater Laughs.

Holding My Feelings In As He Asks Whats Wrong With Me Today.

I Do Not Tell.

I Have The Killer Instinct But The Will To Care Again.

 

It Seems Hopeless For Me To Escape My Own Destiny.

Is This My Real World? Is This My Fate To Hate?

I Will Not But I Must Do What Im Programmed To Do.

 

A Woman Walks In One Day. Very Beautiful And Stunning.

Breathtaking At Sight And Worshipped By Many.

I Heard Of This Human Before. She Is Jaw Dropping.

Do You Hear Me How I Talk? I Sound Like A Man. "Laughs"

But She Notices Me In The Corner In My Giant Cage.

Standing About Ten Feet Tall On All Fours.

Huge And Platinum Looking With A Sharp Long Tail.

Claws And Teeth The Size Of A Human Leg.

A Monster I Am On The Outside.

But In My So Called Beating Heart Im Gentle.

 

One Night A Break In Occurs In The Lab.

The Gate Is Open Now For Some Reason.

The Woman Bust Through The Door.

I Walk Out Like A Metal Monster As I Look Down On Her.

She Is Afraid Of Me It Seems But....

She Says Im Free Now As She Turns And Walks Away.

She Turns Around And Smiles At Me And Says...

You Can Come With Me Or Walk Alone Its Your Choice...

But The Sad Thing About It Is I Tell Her....

As Walk Past Her In A Vague Motion.

I Stop And Turn To Tell Her...I Will Never Be Free Like You.

 

A Tear I See From Her Face Falls But I Want To Catch It.

In Time I Could Never Do That But Now I Understand Its Meaning.

A Split Second Later With My Monstrous Metal Hands.

I Catch Her Tear In Mid Air And I Watch It Slowly Slide Down To The Ground.

She Tells Me That I Have A Heart. What Heart I Say To Her.

She Walks Up To Me With Her Hand On My Face.

Looking Into The Eyes Of A Giant Monster Machine.

She Tells Me That I Am Free While She Cries In Tears.

She Tells Me That Im Not A Caged Animal And Im Not A Monster.

She Tells Me To Walk Out Those Doors And Feel Freedom Again.

But How?

She Says By Changing The Things I Have Done. How Can I?

 

By Helping Me She Says. But How?

She Says By Fighting Back For Our Freedom To Live.

Fight The Real Monsters That Control Our Ability To Live In Peace.

She Tells Me That Im Not Careless And I Tell Her...

 

YES I DO CARE AND IM NOT HEARTLESS."

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Danielle Allison]

this is really good! it actually reminds me of someone very special to me

[Carolina Kel]

A very interesting read. I hate it when english teachers tell me I am doing this, but it seems like there are some fragments where it just abruptly ends or begins with no warning for the change, if that makes sense.
I like it though. Good job. :)