Love And Lust

Growing Within.

"Criss Cross The Obvious.

 Stand Ontop Of Doubt.

 Look Down Into Yourself.

 Love Is Now In Chains. 

 Broken And Beaten.

 Within The Moment Of Truth.

 Take A Simple Step Outside.

 Your World Is A Lonely One.

 

 Drained By Lust.

 Taken By Greed.

 Devoured By Personal Demons.

 You Must Walk To The Edge.

 Go Ahead And Jump Inside.

 Become Your Own Doom.

 Put Your Hand Inside First.

 The Puddle Of Hopelessness.

 The Shade Of The Moon.

 Is Your Hope Of Growing.

 Hope Within Aggravated.

 Concept Fallen To Far.

 You Are Truely Lost.

 Write Your Words In Frost.

 Of Words That Are Meaningless.

 Lies Seek To Freeze Your Soul.

 Love And Lust Forever Fighting.

 Remember The Good But Live The Bad.

 Strike Into The Heart That Cares.

 And Watch It Forget What It Held Close."    

Reviews

[Chris]

Stanza three last line... "Your" or You?

I liked the way the poem read though to me Capping everything ended up capping nothing.