Toxic

Like ashes of a cigarette 

So fragile and used up

The fading smoke

On which I choke

Reminds me of you

-Jaspar

Reviews

[BlaqkShadow]

Short and sweet, but a complete winner. I really don't know which line I love the most :) I wish it were longer!

[Jaspar]

Thanks for the positive feed. It helps to inspire me to keep writing. Thanks again(:

[BlaqkShadow]

Keep going :D

[Insight "MH"]

When I advise somebody to quit smoking, I tell him what do you do when you finish smoking the cigarette? he answers: I throw it and stomp on it, i say to him: it will stomp on you oneday and kill you. The relations that some peopel have are like their relation to a cigarette, they use it till the last bit, then they throw it to the ground and stomp on it.

Thank you for sharing this lovely piece.