Why Do I

Feed her to the sharks at the lions gate.

Float the b***h or burn her at the stake.

Remember the love but feel the hate.

She played you make no mistake.

Why-do-I always feel the heat.

Always the one crying at your feet.

My stomach is a fist clenched tight.

Brand the b***h and bleed her slow.

Bury her and let her go.

I can't care anymore.

I don't care anymore.

Why-do-I always care more.

Pathetic puddle on the floor.

The one left holding on.

But no more, I'm f*****g gone.

-Jaspar

Reviews

[3X3MPLER]

i can feel the emotions in every word.cool piece

[JC]

gotta make this one a song man, flows lyrically and deep

[Philip Muls]

Anger and loss. Float the b***h...well put. Very authentic feeling poem.

Well done.

[AaronFreitas]

This is awesome... no fear just pure straight forward emotion. Awesome work!

[MissLaine]

Wow, this is a powerful write, full of raw emotions in this poem. I can really feel the wrath. The fury of the writer's pain shows real well in this. Wonderful! :)

[Cara]

you can really put word together well i havent learned to do that properly yet. i should ust stick to writing stories

[hayleee.]

I love this, I feel as if I can feel your emotion bleeding out through the words you've strung together.
wonderfully satisfying, thank you for the read.

[BlaqkShadow]

Woah, a lot of passion in here! It's so well written and flows very well, I can feel the heat coming from the words, your feelings are brilliantly displayed.
I especially love "remember the love but feel the hate", because it's not like all original love you had for a person just melts away but the hate is over-riding and all consuming.
Excellent X

[sL]

This poem bleeds passion and has great rhythm. It's very satisfying to read.

[Jaspar]

Thanks E.J. I've been trying to let go of a girl for close to a year now. It's not easy as I'm sure you know. Writing helps me get through this hard time in life. Thanks for the great feedback.