desert beauty

observing desert life come alive as rain pours down.

 

 

fragrant sweet grass grow

drenched in summer monsoon

tassels dance in wind

 

Reviews

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

Lovely Jaweena:)

[Christina May Shanaberg]

You speak of things that few know and understand! You speak of a love of nature and not of man. Few can see the beauty of a blade of grass. Only, looking past it to something worldly that can't last. I love your poem and I love your heart!!

[Rene Velez]

short and wonderful, nice poem.

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

it has been raining every evening the last week, very green and beautiful here. Pretty soon we will be going out to the Northern Ute rez to Sundance. I am looking forward to camping out! We will have lots of sweet grass this year!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Absolutely delightful! I can see the dancing tassels.

Love it!

[Coyote Poetry]

I have sweet grass in my yard. The wild rabbits come in the night and eat. Sometime I watch them. In a few words you create a good vision. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Carlana J.]

It doen't rain, but it pours. This is something that we would say in the desert in California, and I know that it also can be said about Utah. Isn't it amazing when the desert blooms, from all that brown and then all of a sudden, like a blink of an eye, colors galor!!! Sweet and to the point. I liked it!!

[Robin]

envisioned with all of my senses ~

[Desert Dreamer]

I smile and envision happy desert grass after the summer rain. I am looking forward to the rain, saw a monsoon cloud forming in the sky today, the first one this year. Perfect time for your poem.