When You See a Stranger

When You See a Stranger

A Poem by JayG
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A bit of silliness for the kids. Prosody is a bit off and there are inconsistencies stanza-to-stanza, but luckily, kids don't notice

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When You See a Stranger

A question for kids

 

 

You see a stranger on the street

Where would you go, if you wore his feet?

 

Is he kind to his children? Is he nice to his wife?

Or is his day troubled…and filled with strife?

 

With what kind of treat does he end his meal?

Is it ice cream and pie, or crackers with eel?

 

Is reddish purple his favorite hue?

Or greenish red, all mixed with blue?

 

Does he drive a car or row a boat?

Fly an eagle…or ride a goat?

 

How does he get where he hopes to be?

Perhaps he swings from tree-to-tree?

 

Is his family nice or zombie-esque?

Do they call to talk or only text?

 

Do they read a book or do they dance?

When danger calls do they take a chance?

 

But, asking that, a thought occurs.

Would they like your world?

Would you like theirs?

© 2024 JayG


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This poems is one of the few that I enjoy. It really makes the stranger into a person, not just a random passerby.

Posted 4 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Simple rhymes and simple a simple pace it is perfect for a child- artless art. I disagree with your statement that kids don't notice; kids don't miss a thing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Brad Dehler

3 Months Ago

Absolutely! Its like the missing pages from the publisher father in Elf the movie....
This poem was a delight to read and took me back to my childhood and the reading of nursery rhymes in kindergarten. It may appear simplistic but has such a deep meaning to it. Much like the art of Dr. Seuss. Thank you for sharing this exhilarating poem.

Posted 4 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 9, 2021
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JayG
JayG

Elkins Park, PA



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I've been actively writing fiction for about 40 years and have been offered, and signed, 7 publishing contracts. I have a total of 30 books available at booksellers at the moment. I've taught writing .. more..