When You See a Stranger

A bit of silliness for the kids. Prosody is a bit off and there are inconsistencies stanza-to-stanza, but luckily, kids don't notice

When You See a Stranger

A question for kids

 

 

You see a stranger on the street

Where would you go, if you wore his feet?

 

Is he kind to his children? Is he nice to his wife?

Or is his day troubled…and filled with strife?

 

With what kind of treat does he end his meal?

Is it ice cream and pie, or crackers with eel?

 

Is reddish purple his favorite hue?

Or greenish red, all mixed with blue?

 

Does he drive a car or row a boat?

Fly an eagle…or ride a goat?

 

How does he get where he hopes to be?

Perhaps he swings from tree-to-tree?

 

Is his family nice or zombie-esque?

Do they call to talk or only text?

 

Do they read a book or do they dance?

When danger calls do they take a chance?

 

But, asking that, a thought occurs.

Would they like your world?

Would you like theirs?

Reviews

[DaveHRakkar]

Amazingly written! you really capture the essence of moment.

[Lynda Logan]

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[Wanzala Meshack]

Amazing work of literature I love it

[wedopodcast]

I have a song with the same name. This one is amazing, I must admit LOL
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[Ashi written tale & poe..]

You wrote a beautifully crafted poem, and I truly enjoyed it. It's as if I'm singing a song while reading your words.

[robert harris jr]

nice poem nice rhyme and beat

[Gregoria Ahmed]

You have a delightful and whimsical piece that encourages children to use their imagination and empathy. The playful questions about the stranger's life, preferences, and actions spark curiosity and creativity. The poem's light-hearted tone and humorous scenarios make it engaging for kids, while the underlying message about understanding and considering others' perspectives adds depth. It's a fun and thought-provoking poem that invites children to think beyond appearances and explore the possibilities of different lives.

[Martiya Daman]

This poem is both imaginative and meaningful, offering children a playful way to explore empathy and understanding. The whimsical scenarios like "swinging from tree-to-tree" or "crackers with eel" spark curiosity while gently guiding readers to consider other perspectives. The closing question, “Would they like your world? Would you like theirs?” is particularly profound, encouraging reflection on our own lives and interactions.

Its rhyming pattern and light-hearted tone make it perfect for kids, but the deeper message about kindness, diversity, and self-awareness resonates with all ages. A truly thoughtful and creative piece, Jay!