Reminiscient of Shell Silverstein. Your poem is excessively rhymey, like a childs might be.It seems simple, like a nursery rhyme, but it fortells of Jerry, the hairy fairy.
The Poem is carefree and fun, but it has a dark side, just as a fairy tale might.
Jerry is Scarey.
I dont know about anyone else, but I wonder if Jerry stands in as a representation of someone else. If so, who is Jerry?
Posted 3 Months Ago
3 Months Ago
No hidden messages of people roasting. This one was just to make an adorable six year old giggle.
It’s sweet that your granddaughter inspired this. Children have a way of bringing the most unexpected joy. I don’t have any of my own, but I’ve helped raise children through my siblings, and that kind of love leaves a lasting mark.
The poem itself is light and playful, with rhyme that flows like a bedtime giggle. A lovely way to make someone smile.
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