Hysterical Anomalies

Based on my short-stories, Hysteria and Anomalies.

I draw you a word,

To help me see,

I paint you a river,

To help me clean,

I read you a face,

To help me breathe,

I write you a desert,

To help me keep,

I sing you a heart,

To help me feel,

I whisper you a key,

To help me sleep.

Reviews

[Laurel Price Gaylor]

Nice juxtaposition of give and take. It makes me curious what s/he is seeing, keeping, feeling. A lot of work has gone into this, I'm sure, to draw connections. And I think its as much about opposites and it is about sameness. Good job! :)

[EternityWolf101]

I like it. It drew me into the poem in an instant.