Dialysis

Wondering if there’s any point in my body still breathing

Wondering if there’s any point of my name being muttered

Wondering if there’s any point as to why I still stand

 

I’m waiting for something I don’t actually believe in

I’m watching everything in peripheral vision trying to

figure out my own mass produced questions

I doubt will ever have meaning

 

I’m sorry for being a useless human being

I’m sorry for wasting the time I had, have and will posses

I’m sorry for looking at a face that’s seen better days whenever I       

see my own reflection

 

I’m sorry for being me

Author's Note

There is no direct link between the title and the rest of the piece so think about how this speaks to you yourself

Reviews

[Renée]

Depression, Desperation this could be anyone dealing with life and its mental exhaustion

[Brittany]

This kinda tugs at me. Like it's a cry for help, and I don't want anyone to feel that way because I've been there.

[Marie]

This is a pretty gloomy poem, but I can understand someone on dialysis thinking these thoughts.

[Just Jayren]

Although It's hard to by pass the title, I used Dialysis as a symbol but not an actual reference for the writing itself

[Mockingbird]

this is very tragic. also contains angst and despair. great job.

[~LadyWolf~]

Good job ~ Very sad.