Rush hour

Another attempt at a haiku.

Shadows dance under
Fire on the horizon:
The suit-clad rush home.

Author's Note

In my seminar group, the tutor told us to observe a scene for 15 minutes and then write three haikus about what we have seen. I chose the street below my block flats at sunset.

Reviews

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I am not typically a connoisseur of Haikus, but this one seemed nearly perfect (according to my limited knowledge. I very much enjoyed it.

[penless writer]

I liked it!!
Fire on the horizon - Nice metaphor