Sweet Dreams

Sweet dreams my darling, sweet dreams my love. With the gun to your temple, I pulled the trigger. Placed a kiss on your cheek, "May you rest in peace." ...

Reviews

[Chris]

Why the cease?

[Jeanelle]

What do you mean?

[Chris]

What was the reasoning to end? What is the tension, the driving need to be released from?

[Chris]

I'm trying to not assume - the living nor the ending - or motivations.

[Jeanelle]

I'm not really much of a poet. Well actually I'm not a poet. It's just a little something I came up with, took me about a minute I guess. Besides, what I've figured out is that if I continue with it, I am going to mess it up. No doubt. So I'd rather just leave it as it is

[Chris]

First: don't sell yourself so short - each of us are unique.
Second: You spent a minute of YOUR life and touched something inside that had a person half-a-world away pause and think about. That is kind of cool.
3rd: I didn't ask you to change a thing... I was wondering of your motivations - the why's behind your thoughts - that was all.
Fourth: Welcome to WritersCafe.

[Jeanelle]

There aren't really any "why's" behind my thoughts, not that I know of anyway.. Wow, I really don't think enough =/

[Chris]

Our perceptions shape many things... our lives and the cultures around us shape our perceptions. It hurts less if we try to understand ourselves.

[Jeanelle]

Right..