Time is Ticking

Time is limited

Days run short

Minutes run out

We can't pick when we leave

But we can make every day count

Live each day like it's our last

Reviews

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~ indeed... beautifully said... ~ i live one day at a time... else it gets too much for me to handle... because of too many problems and too many unresolved issues...

[Trigorin]

Not bad. The brevity of this piece really works for you, I think, and while you do have a fairly simple and generic topic, you manage to keep it interesting and make it your own. You could have used a bit more imagery, I think - at present this looks just a tad bland and the ending is not original at all, but this is still a good start.