Die4U

Something I wrote about my ex.

I would have died for you.

I would have killed for you.

I would have done anything you asked me to.

I would have thrown it all away for you.

I would have lived on the streets for you.

I would have given you my soul if you asked for it.

Could you see me like you did before?

Could you tear down your walls?

Could you let me in?

If I gave you my heart on a platter, would you return?

If I gave you my eyes, would you see me again?

If I gave you my life, would you cherish it?

Would you take it and tear it apart?

Would you turn and leave?

Would you laugh and never return?

I would have died for you.

How many others would say the same?

Reviews

[Irene]

That was beautiful.

[zainul]

Honest feeling of emotion for a person who lived for a long time with you and left for reasons beyond your control.
The feelings came naturally and I felt they were genuine thoughts.
Thanks for sharing :)

[Gray Witch]

I always like to review the first post of someone new to me...It helps me get to know what is important IMHO...Great poem to an Ex.... Heartfelt and pithy ...

[Loner]

Jeff this is the most beautifull thought i have read up till now its such a touching poem i can feel yr pain and agony in this . Awsome!!!!!!!!!

[deeps]

If I gave you my heart on a platter, would you return?
If I gave you my eyes, would you see me again?
If I gave you my life, would you cherish it?
Would you take it and tear it apart?
Would you turn and leave?
Would you laugh and never return?
I would have died for you.
How many others would say the same?

These are the most amazing words here,
I loved this part. this is awesome.