Shadows

Your shadow dances upon my wall

Your voice echoes down the hall

Our bed keeps your scent

Your laugh is ever present
I find strains of your hair

And remember the love in your stare

I feel your fingers on me

But you're no where near me

Reviews

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. i can paint pictures of you ... in thin air ... i can hear your songs in my soul ... i can believe in us forever ... but i can't believe in your disbelief ... for that's the only thing that keeps you away ... and that's what i feel like echoing after reading your words, jeff ... they are so sublime ...

[Alicia Schroeder]

aw, it sounds like a lost loved one, that's the picture it creats in my mind anyway. Very good..

[Vertigo]

sad yet sweet in a way :)

[Crinkle°]

s**t, you're so in love...

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Oh! It is as if You painted a picture! :) It is sweetly melancholy...wishing....
A lovely piece all-in-all :)

[Michael X]

shadows and heartache and all that encompasses the feeling of a dying
desire set to mystique and wonders of the night, you have a consistant
style my friend, and the use of imagery really bloms in your words
with scents and sounds, beautiful job here, such a well created
sorrow and sadness. a 100