A Kiss

I want to feel your lips against mine

And put my hands around your waistline

Pull you close to me

Kiss you deeply

Get lost in feelings

Two hurt beings

Forgetting the present

Enjoying our moment

Just the two of us

Fighting our darkness

Author's Note

This kind of feels likes one of my old songs I used to write in high school.

Reviews

[Ashley]

wow i can relate to this so much, love it! 100/100

[Michael X]

the opening scene feels like a raging passion yet gentle enough to affect
the reader in sentimental ways. this poem is about its romantic ambience,
and the the soft images bring the words life with tone and feature.
the line" forgetting the present" shifts the intention from passive to stillness,
as in capturing the moment, beautiful poem here jeff, done classically.

[Vertigo]

Beautiful...I love the way this flows and how I can relate to the thought :)

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Lovely...You've captured a sliver of time...encrusted it in gold..a beautiful poem full of beautiful sentiment...

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. there really is nothing more special than that moment ... when darkness vanishes ... like it never was ... beautiful words, jeff ...

[Crinkle°]

that's very romantic.