Golden Girl

Golden Girl

U can't hide your sad eyes

They show the pain in your soul

Golden Girl

Why the look of hurt

When you're so beautiful

Golden Girl

What happened to you

To rob you of that light

Golden Girl

Can I help you

Bring back the light in your eyes

Reviews

[Michael X]

simplicty captures the attention, and the reader gets the impression of
a caring meaning in nature, a concerned love of an innocent lonnging
to know and poetically balanced form and rhythm, after all form creates
rhythm and the heart is the canvas to this painted image of golden
eyes and the sense of losing something close to the heart,
a very interesting and awsome reading, you are on a roll with devices

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

I know this veil of beauty underlying which is a deep sorrow..well written my friend.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

Very sweet, Jeff....simplistic but endearing and I find that I like the simple fare after all ....it is more touching :)

[Crinkle°]

what a beautiful lil piece of tenderness...

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. oh ... what a sweet song ... so inspirational ... with a beautiful lilt ...

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

simple little spark that is so big