Dream Woman

In my dreams

This beautiful woman

Stands beside me

Her eyes shine like a thousand suns

Bright and beautiful

Burning with love and desire

In these dreams

I know someday

Someone will look at me like she does

Reviews

[Stef Outsiders]

aw what a lovely poem, hope you find her some day!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Another great write! if you haven't found the right woman keep search! NEVER GIVE UP!!!!

[Dushyant Thadani]

I have that dream all the time. But I hope you get to be with the woman who will look at you like this. Great work Jeff

[Amit Parmessur]

Hello friend, I am reading lots of poems around looking to give talented people the chance of having their poems published if they are interested, of course. You write well. Do consider submitting to my new magazine which publishes online.
Read about us at http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/

We have already published a first collection at
http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/golden-apple-issue-1-october-2010.html

Have a look at the guidelines at
http://goldenappleezine.blogspot.com/2010/10/submissions.html

We have no specific restrictions on themes, so if you are interested send a couple of nice poems or stories.
Regards.

[A.A.Romanczuk]

A dripping honey comb...Jeff...sweetness incarnate...

[Crinkle°]

it's all I wish for you... :o)

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. amen ... and simply exotically poetic this is ... beautiful beyond measure ... ravishing beyond sublime ... stunning work, jeff ... (many, many thanks for the link) ...

[Dani]

I like this a lot. :) Good write.