Questions

Do you hear the sound

The sound of

My heart breaking

Do you feel the warmth

The warmth of

My blood spilling

Will you still think of me

Like you think of me

When we were together

Will you still see me

As you saw me

For our time together

Will you someday

Think of me

And what could have been

Reviews

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. they always do, jeff ... except not as soon as us ... this is the sensitive person's heart and song in a poem ... it's overwhelming and poignant beyond measure and i sing it with you ...

[Black Cat Fever]

Those painful feelings of longing. I know they hurt. Nicely done as well.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem, It's hard giving up someone you care about, you wonder if they know what they lost and could have gained!