I Believe

When you're down

I'll lift you from the ground

When you're high

I'll be your sky

I believe in you

You believe in me

I never knew someone like you

Could touch me so deeply

I believe in God above

I believe in our love

You healed my broken heart

Encased me in your heart

I let go of the broken heart

I believe in our miracle

I welcome a new start

On our path to the spiritual

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

THIS IS VERY GOOD...
I LIKE THE FIRST...
FOUR LINES THE MOST...
GOOD JOB JEFF...

[An owl on the moon]

There is a glorious hope that flows through your words, for love and life and every day to come... I needed something to inspire me, and your words worked perfectly...

[SilentLullabies]

Wonderfully written :)

[sarah]

awww this is so stunning! and wonderful! keep up the great work!

[Stef Outsiders]

Aww love it! crafted beautifully...

[Tomi]

i like the flow, it portrays a spiritual dimension to love... lovely!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was so romantic and beauitful al rolled up into one outstanding read!

[Liza]

this is a classic hero saving the damsel in distress - borderline love story

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. ohhhhhh ... this is absolutely perfection personified ... my gosh the simplicity and precision yet profundity in this poem is absolutely astonishing ... it's like the blue print of a religion, jeff ... one of your best ... without a doubt ... definitely in your top 10, if not top 5 ... skillful and sensitive beyond measure ... and the last four lines especially ... and the last line ... and the last word ... especially ... truly, this is "spiritual" ... all that people usually say about it and all the jargon they use ... to say all that they say is redundant in front of this message of love ... spectacular poetry ...