Fire

Fire
In Her lips
Fire
In her touch
Soft fingers across my skin

Fire
In her arms
Fire
With her kiss
when she breathes

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

SHORT...
SWEET AND TO...
THE POINT I...
REALLY ENJOYED THIS...

[Sports Girl]

This is short but beautifully done

[Norma M Sutton]

It's dangerous to play with fire you know :) Nice.

[Liza]

fire to warm your love - hot :)

[SilentLullabies]

Very short and simple, yet wonderfully put together. I loved reading this.

[Stef Outsiders]

Hot! I know that "Fire" all to well! LOL simple, delicate and perfect!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

What a firey love! Well expressed poem! A love that hot is wonderful to have!

[Gomer LePoet]

hmmm. are you talking about Hot Lips Houlihan? lol. yes. they are out there. and you are a part of creating that fire are you will never feel it.

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. NP said it perfectly ... i have ... of course ... not felt a woman's fire ... but then fire is fire ... and the fire that came my way was pretty consuming and desirable ...

[Nothing Personal]

I know it Jeff. I know that fire. Oh how it burns..Oh and how I love to burn..It's a great tribute to the sensorium of passion that ignites with intimacy..Powerful poem !!