Would You Marry Me?

I want to know

Are you looking for a King

To sit beside you my Queen

I want to know

Are you looking for a man

To love you eternally

You're my passion

You're my joy

You're my everything

I want to know

Would you love me

I want to know

Would you carry my baby

I want to know

Would you marry me

Author's Note

It's kind of lyrical, don't you think?

Reviews

[Inkcognito]

A very charming piece, clean and simple ...love beats its own drum and even if she answers "yes" to only half those questions, I reckon you've picked yourself a winner!

[.]

. yes, absolutely ... very melodious and lyrical ... and would lend itself to musical notes ... very well ...

[Crinkle°]

We feel a lot of sincerity in these simple words. And I've noticed a lot of english speakers talk about their woman as their queen... They precisely use this term, as you did... Well, just to say.

[Isolophobe]

Lyrical and sentimental. Overtly both, I think.

[?]

Yes, I'll marry you, oh wait I am married, sry
lol
Yes it is lyrical, the flow is great
Another one I love

[Stef Outsiders]

it is lyrical but simply and enchanting! I like it!

[Liza]

thought provoking questions only a Queen can answer if she believe she is one - regal and classic

[Frank F. Atanacio]

it's how you rap with it LOL I think it's simplicity is what makes this poem work :)