Deeper Surreal Dream

I have awaken in a deep dream, surrounded by your presence.   

In the dawn I saw you rise above the ocean and break forth into flight. 

As you soared far into the heavens.  

You enlightened my very soul.  

For it was dark until you blessed me with your heavenly kiss!

Author's Note

This just came to me.

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

OH VERY NICE...
=]...

[Ruth]

And that darkness is caressed, obliterated by the power of the heart! Nicely done love
xx

[Dushyant Thadani]

Beautiful... Just so descriptive and amazing and you fit so many things in 5 lines. I am so amazed by this

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

So beautiful, hallmark card material!

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. stunning, stunning, stunning !!! ... absolutely breathtakingly beautiful poetry, dear jeff !!! ...

[SilentLullabies]

Wow, this poem is so romantic! Good job!

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

Spontaneous and beautiful..:)

[Stef Outsiders]

Poem are at there best when they just come to you i think, and it's a beautiful poem you have here, Deep and meaningful well done! :)

[Norma M Sutton]

Nice

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Glad it did. Thats so beautiful and I might add lil romantic
Gosh this really touch me for some reason.
I just love it. To me this one doesnt matter that it is short has depth in it.
Thanks for sharing with me