Remember Me

When the rain falls upon my skin

I shall remember these tears

I shed for you today

When the cold wind blows

I'll remember this feeling

Deep inside me tonight

Our love was born

Out of two people

Searching for something true

We found one another

And shared a peace

Neither one of us felt before

You'll always live inside of me

Deep in my heart

I'll always keep you there

Someday I'll look back at you

Remember our weekend

And relive every second of it

When I hear that song

That you whispered to me

As we made love

I hope that someday

You'll find me again

But if not, remember me

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

I LOVE HOW...
I CONNECT WITH...
YOU'RE WRITING IT...
MAKES IT SO...
MUCH BETTER TO...
READ AND YOU...
KEEP ME DAZED...

[kuru]

very emotional and heartfelt..nicely written love the last stanza

[Norma M Sutton]

sad

[Stef Outsiders]

Aww, this is sweet, heartfelt and a really stunning piece...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very good poem!

I hope that someday
You'll find me again
But if not, remember me

That saids it all! wanting to meet up again, but if you don't you hope she'll remember you like you do her!

[Liza]

heartfelt longing of a shortlived intensity that is relived and comforted in mind...beautiful

[Beth Wilcox]

This was amazing. Many people can relate to this, I do believe.

[?]

Well gosh Jeff, do you know me? lol
Seems alot of your poems could be about me and my life. lol
This is great, I can relate so much. WOW
Really enjoyed reading this