Into the Void

Left to face this alone

The darkness rises like a beast

I'm on my own

You should have never came

The wounds you left

I'll never be the same

Darkness is alive

Infecting mysoul

How will I survive

Look what you've become

In my eyes

The one with the venom

What have you done

To my soul

My God what have you done

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

THIS SOUNDS HURT...
BUT...
MORE THAN THAT...
ANOTHER GREAT WRITE...

[YouoweYoupay]

Dark, broken emotions here. Expressed with a plain, nice flow. Keep writing.

[Stef Outsiders]

You sound fierce in this, like as if someone has hurt you, it radiates from your words...

[Meaghan]

I could actually feel this as I read it, awesome.

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. excruciating ...
. no words ... speechless and moved to tears ...

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very powerful poem! when someone hurts you you wonder what they've done! you wonder how to get your life back on track, and in the end you finally realized all you can do is move farward!

[?]

None of will be the same, because we grow and learn.
This is really really powerful Jeff. Speak it out!!
Alot of your poems I can so relate.
Thanks again for sharing with me

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

Stirring!