Serve Your Soul

Too many masters to serve

We've got the dollar

More to grab

More to spend

We've got new shiny objects

All the newest and greatest

We have to have right now

Without rhyme or reason

So much time

Wasted on the win

We must know

We have to find it within

They all want us to serve them

And ignore the wind

All you have to serve

Is to serve your soul

Reviews

[AlieahRose]

ONCE AGAIN YOU'VE...
BROUGHT STRONG WORDS...
AND DEEP MEANING...
IN YOUR WRITING...
JOB WELL DONE...

[lovejulez03]

Creatively written. Well done. I can feel the emotion behind this and it's short and to the point. Really makes you think about the truth.

[Nothing Personal]

yes the soul we shall serve
the soul shall set us free
All other masters are setting suns
Who cares for them as we wait, for night to arrive(come)

Like the spirit. Deep poem in simple language..Good work..

[Ruth]

The soul is what frees us! To serve others, is all good, but without serving ourselves, we fall into the trap of stagnancy! Excellent work! xx

[Apathy To Empathy]

and so the truth is revealed

Great job!

[iamkim]

This is absolutely true! We can serve others, why not serve ourselves too right?

Good job friend! I love this piece :)

[Stef Outsiders]

There is truth in this, the world might as well grow money on trees... nice write! thumbs up!

[Norma M Sutton]

Nicely said.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This poem holds so much truth! Take care of yourself and live life as you see fit, be true to yourself and family! Well written

[Sunni Davis]

I love the concept of this "And ignore the wind/All you have to serve/ Is to serve your soul. Its so true. We're driven by what society says we need to have: money,popularity and objects. Its liberating to be able to simplify and just do whats best for ourselves and the ones we love. Great job!