The Sea

There's a line in the river

Where two souls meet

Where vivid pictures

Lay behind my eyes

A strong current pulling me

Into the unknown sea

I feel a kiss on my lips

The flavor of a kindred soul

Sets my mind at ease

A place where two angels

Become one soul

Blessed with the truth

Let's swim in the sea

Glide in the current

Connect on every level

Go to a place

Where two waters

Join into the sea

Reviews

[Liza]

two magnetic and longing hearts meet their attraction in a vast body of water and create waves - beautiful

[Misty Blue Eyes]

aww i liked this, the way the two meet. very nicely written

[A.A.Romanczuk]

an adorable union...i like the use of the water element to illustrate that harmony...your poetry is sweet and simple

[Black Cat Fever]

This creates quite the vivid imagery of two people finding each other and falling in love. Very nice & romantic. A joy to read.

[Stef Outsiders]

I could visualize this.. it a really nice image! well done...

[kuru]

very beautiful..."become one soul blessed with the truth" that line stood out the most to me

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

We always are seeking this kind of connections..until then we are lost pieces ofa puzzle it seems.

[Lily Mae]

This is absolutely beautiful.. You weave magic with your words. I love this write..xxx

[typingaway]

You have great talent!
Keep up the good work!!

[Tomi]

i like the flow.