The Sea

There's a line in the river

Where two souls meet

Where vivid pictures

Lay behind my eyes

A strong current pulling me

Into the unknown sea

I feel a kiss on my lips

The flavor of a kindred soul

Sets my mind at ease

A place where two angels

Become one soul

Blessed with the truth

Let's swim in the sea

Glide in the current

Connect on every level

Go to a place

Where two waters

Join into the sea

Reviews

[Apathy To Empathy]

I loved how well this was written

[Cherrie]

i loved how you brought this to a close

[Judy Ponceby]

Beautifully written.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

This was to beautiful, I could see it play out in my mind as I read! MY Favorite!!

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

The sea of love we all float upon the tide, excllent poem.

[Ashley]

the romantic imagery of this is nothing but beautiful. the comparison of water to relationships is a truly tangible expression of the emotions felt between two partners. love it.

[Sunni Davis]

So beautiful...it brought a tear to my eye as I read this. I love the comparison of two rivers and two souls becoming one. Great job!

[Ashley]

sooo gorgeous, i love this write, like always, amazing job!

[?]

Beautiful Jeff, (two waters, join into the sea/two souls, join together)
Thats what I get out of it anyway.
Wrong or right , I thought it was beautiful