The Rebirth

My wheels were spinning

I was going nowhere

Just as fast as I could

No touch, no feeling

So much this weary soul

Weathered on this journey

There's a spark inside me

A life reborn

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

and the poetry really keeps that spark going ^ . ^

[An owl on the moon]

How i could relate to that feeling.. no movement... soul weary.. beat down. But you don't leave off there.. you give us hope that life can come again. Powerful.

[Emily B]

it rolls right along . . .

[Ashley]

i'm fairly certain that the only thing i can say to describe how i feel about this is: amen. and the spark kinda feels good. excellent work.