Laying Here

Your scent lingers on my pillow

I take it in as I lay to sleep

Your kiss rests on my lips

As I lay here thinking of you

You lay next to me

As my eyes close

You may not be here

But you are in my soul

Reviews

[Allie :)]

This is cute, short, simple, and enlessly sweet :)
I hate that feeling though...when you really love someone, and you've gotten a big dose of their love, but they left a long time ago...so all that you're left with...is the ghost of their precense.
:/
Great piece! :D

[Ashley]

love you.

Awe this is so wonderful and sweet for the one that you love.

[Sunni Davis]

Its amazing how the essense of someone we love stays with us, even after they've left. Terrific poem,Jeff!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

a perfect ending to a prose full of wrought emaciation and clarity of goodbyes, well written, excellent work.