Heart Strings

I am lifeless until you touch my heart

I dance for your smile as it tugs at my strings 

My spinning pirouette gracefully executed, as you said "I love you"

I am still, waiting here once more for your words to move my heart

Here in my stationary solitude, I wait to be moved into life once more

Waiting for your touch...that one touch that leads to my heart

Reviews

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Often it almost hurts
when this occurs with the heart
because you miss them if you've
not spoken to them in so long.

The heart is a fragile piece
as it must be shielded and protected
always as mines gotten hurt so much
so I keep it protected and wrapped in
God's armour as we must shield our hearts.


Nicely painted to the page.

Thank you for sharing.

I agree with misery
Great work.

God bless. Benita

[Jen]

Thank you Benita, for your time to review this poem. Your words are greatly appreciated.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're welcome was a pleasure to read. Benita

[Philip Muls]

Vulnerability, honesty, sadness. But hope because you can still be moved into life and you are willing to wait.

Well done. Elegant, fragile.

[Jen]

Thank you for your review, it is appreciated.

[AaronFreitas]

This is a great write Jen... the picture fits perfect. Overall I loved it :)

[Jen]

Thank you Aaron, your reviews are always a treat! Thank you!!!

[Jennifer M. Pennington]

Beautifully articulated. Well done, girl. Really painted a picture.

[Jen]

Thank you so much for your review...much appreciated!

[Jennifer M. Pennington]

Anytime, honey!

[Misery]

An excellent poem, dear Jen. One of your best creations. The artwork you chose perfectly blends with your words.

[Jen]

Thank you sweet Misery, your review is most appreciated!

[Misery]

Always welcome.