Disguise, Decide, Collide

Desire and sin enveloped in flesh;

yet you are more pure, more perfect than the rest.

My eager ears and hungry eyes,

innocence is their best disguise.

They listen and watch through a window of self-control,

as life without you continues to unfold.

"Unacceptable!", they both decide.

"We must have their fates collide."

Reviews

[Jeneeness]

The "they" are the eager ears and hungry eyes. :p

[the in between]

This is really good! amazing read :D sounds like lust and love mixed as one but mostly lust. I just don't understand the last part who's they and their? and who is you? two people decide and they want some other peoples fates to collide? thanks for sharing jenee :] your awesome!!! keep writing

[200STM]

She has a way with words! Grand Poem my dear!

[DamienHino]

AWESOME! I don't know what else to say It's a great poem