How Can I?

Third attempt at poetry.

How can I be strong

when I feel so weak

this huge weight is just wrong

making it hard to breathe

 

How can I be strong

when it feels so hard to go on

every day is a new path

on the way to the last

 

How can I not be strong

when I'm still living my life

pushing through the days

in which I almost lose my way

 

How can I not be strong

when I help myself

before everyone else

when they don't feel strong

Author's Note

Be honest I would love to know what people think!

Reviews

[JC]

I sense the weight on your shoulders, how you make yourself strong for others even when you want to be weak sometimes, and I see how you struggle and emerge stronger than ever. Was very lyrical and powerful.

[Kat]

Thank you very much for the review! :)

[justdandy]

Woww... Each stanza rhymed.... That is what I liked... If you add a little rhyming ti the last few stanzas, it will make the poem even better

[Kat]

Thank you very much!