Snow Cone

Happiness is like a snow cone...
It's there one minute
And the next its gone.
It's so sweet
That you can't help but enjoy it.
When its gone,
Its gone.
Savor it while you can.

Reviews

[Charles]

Your poetry is like a snow cone as well... I'll enjoy it while I can, knowing that it is sweet and may some day be gone. Nice work.

[Marie Harrison]

Beautiful! I love it.

[?]

So very, very true,
Then there are those that dont know what they have until its gone.
Very well put
Short and sweet

[Norma M Sutton]

A interesting analogy.

[clauds294]

Very true, and even though it is light and happy I feel kinda sad to know that happiness is gone in a moment. Great write

[Gomer LePoet]

so true so true. the trick is to eat the snow cone while you are in the freezer, then it will last just a little longer.

[Ruth]

So true! lol
This is beautifully done, concise and has impact!
xx

[Undying Glory]

wow, really sweet was the first thing that came to my mind when i read this one. this is really nice, writing about something we so often overlook. great job