Evolution - Part 1

Part one of my three piece Evolution set

Pounding pressure

Silent roars

Hopeless measures

Please no more

These twisted voices

Are but my own

Layered screaming

All alone

A million thoughts 

Cry all at once

For their own attention

For what it wants

And tortured colors

Paint my mind

Dancing, exploding

I watch their rhyme 

I'm cut in half

Sewed by shaking hands

That told my lies 

And wrecked my plans

My mind creates

This darkening world

Yet still shows off

A smiling girl

Reviews

[Frantzuu]

"My mind creates
This darkening world
Yet still shows off
A smiling girl"

Amazing ending. Despite all the pain and misery sometimes we still wonder how we're still able to smile and go forward. Great poem!