From Here to New York City

Walking down the road,
Not knowing what to say;
The clouds are gray,
But its a beautiful day.

 

We sit down and talk,
Then we go for a walk;
Walk around aimlessly,
Wasting the time away.

 

Never an awkward time,
And I'm feeling just fine;
Writing down this short rhyme,
Dropping another line.

 

Not sure where we are,
But we can't be too far
From where we're supposed to be.

 

Why can't you see
You can't do this to me;
While you're with her.

 

(And there's)

Never an awkward time,
And I'm feeling just fine;
Writing down this rhyme,
Dropping another line.

 

Not sure where I am,
Confused about everything.
From here to New York City;
I don't know where I'm going,
But I know where I've been.

 

And I'm walking on a long road;
Thinking about tomorrow,
Always about tomorrow.

Reviews

[Jen]

i think i'll call it "From Here to New York City"

[J]

It was nice :D Somehow it was like a song.I loved the rhymes I loved the flow.happy Holidays!Great job :D

I loved the beginning :

Walking down the road,
Not knowing what to say;
The clouds are gray,
But its a beautiful day.

We sit down and talk,
Then we go for a walk;
Walk around aimlessly,
Wasting the time away.

It was a nice start :D
I could imagine it :D

[Last Lying Look]

This is fantastic.
I'd have to say my favorite part is;
"(And there's)
Never an awkward time,
And I'm feeling just fine;
Writing down this rhyme,
Dropping another line."
I like the vibe from it. It has a calm yet indecisive feel to it.
For some reason it reminds me of the song 'remembering sunday' by all time low.
I love this :)
-Elissa