To Make Me Smile

Just a few things that make me smile.

Streaks of pink across the sky

as the morning breaks
Our lips touching, kissing deep
never have to fake.

Souls connecting with a tug

Electricity-

My heart feels completely filled
we were meant to be.  
            
Moving closer as you pull
me near you for heat.
Sharing whispers of true love

Now this day's complete.

Author's Note

Keep it between the lines, its easier to read.

Reviews

[Sourodip]

Wow...another lovely poem....:) The second stanza is power packed....specially the metaphor of ''Electricity'' Thanks for sharing such a sweet poem

[Pure Hope]

Thank you, do you see any growth at all between the two pieces you read? They have about 25 years of age and 5 actual years of learning in the time between the both being written. ~jennifer

[Sourodip]

Yeah...this one seemed to be more deep, coming from a more experienced person :D Both are good though

[Pure Hope]

Thank you, I am working hard to improve my work. I am in a haiku class at AllPoetry right now, learning all kinds of things, lol.