She Leaves Ash

Inspired by the phrase "she's a volcano" (requirement- in 79 words or less)

Arriving in ultimate fashion,

hottest crimson cape

trimmed in charcoal brocade,

naturally taking the men's breath away.

She's an explosion

of fiery passion,

letting her love flow

down every inch of your being,

inside and out sweating crowds.

Shadows have
no power over her,
aura blazing,
she leaves ash

everywhere her heart embraces.

©Jennifer L. Hedin

Reviews

[Adam Whitworth]

lovely positive and inspiring, I like that