Over the Edge

Feels like my insides are bleeding.
Heart's racing, mind uncontrolable.
Face drenched in sorrow, pain quenched by nothing, heart wrenched by her, never forgiving, can't go on living.
Can't stand it, can't take it, seeking relief, only never to be found.
Only one way out, the unthinkable, stop your mind, stop your heart, never again to decieve.
No one would have believed that you'd be the one to do it.
But here it goes. Say goodbye forever and take a deep breath...

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

SUCH A DEEP POEM! I CAN RELATE TO DEPRESSION, BUT NEVER SUICIDE!! GREAT WORK

[Misled Legend]

Once again I can relate to this. I've been cheated on before and didn't know it until we broke up and he got married mere days later. I understand the depression and being decieved but I tend to view suicide as overall the coward's way out. In any case keep up the good work.