Ghost in the Rain

Ghost in The Rain

by jeremy wyatt

Did you feel me outside
treading soft to your door
I was trying to knock
as I used to before
but my hands made no noise
and my calls were not heard
for the harder I shout
the more lost are my words

Stood under the stars
in the wind and the wet
I will fade with the day
for the light brings regret
Tonight I'll return
and I'll try once again
but why can't you hear me
outside in the rain

Reviews

[Judy Ponceby]

How very sad and touching. Beautifully expressed and well written. Thank you for sharing.

[Lily Mae]

This I can relate too.. Its hard when life circumstances have you deaf to the knock on the door.. But the rain can't last forever can it? This is a sadder right for you..but I think you penned the emotions well.. xx