Deep in Your Eyes

Deep in Your Eyes

Deep in you eyes
is the flame of the west
the strength of a woman
to pass every test
The world has grey faces
a weight on your back
but you brighten dark places
and face any attack
I can only write words
I can't turn your life round
but I see always a smile
in your face will be found
You'll conquer this world
with your love and your light
your white wings unfurled
for those with far sight

Reviews

[Audrey Howitt]

Such a lovely poem, full of hope and strength.

[FJ Davis]

Oddly, Jeremy, the subject of this poem is not a woman, to me; it is how I see my country--at its very best.
Admittedly, She does have a long way to go.

[Lily Mae]

She was lucky to have you there as a friend..x Great write and tribute to your friend..x

[Judy Ponceby]

Beautiful tribute to a lovely woman Jeremy :) Well done!!