Fire.

Feeling the cold cold silver,

Pressed against my temple,

Never felt so good before...

 

I hear it click back and I wait,

I wait two seconds,

But nothing happens...

 

Why?

Why did this never stop?

My life kept spinning out of control,

But nothing ends it...

 

But tonight,

 With the cold silver against my temple,

I hear the click,

And close my eyes...

 

 

BANG.

 

Author's Note

... YHEP

Reviews

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Very well written. Unfortunately also very true. I loved this, though. Great write!

[Short.Nerd]

Wow great job!

[Helpless]

nice! this could be an amazing song!

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is sad truth. It happens to often, you have indeed stated it well.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

A sad truth that way too many times has come true. Penned well