Invisible girl

Always hiding from the world trying to scream..

but no on can hear 

seeing things she shouldn't see hearing things she 

shouldn't hear 

no one can see the real her 

she is invisible 

Afraid to show her true colors 

to colors to the world 

thinking of what people might think 

so she hides and tries to fit in with 

the crowd but she doesn't know 

how much longer she can take it  

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I like it. That kind of angst you feel is foreign when you are younger and so boring when you are older!! lol You just need more years behind you to put some of these things in better perspective. There's a reason why some of that crowd won't make it to your future!! : ) Keep writing..... xoxo -Mark

[J. C. Koch]

Maybe split the second line into two?

Seeing things she shouldn't see
Hearing things she shouldn't see

I think it would improve the overall aesthetic of the piece

[guiltyascharged]

Oh my GODS! This is... AWESOME! I love this, I really do. You worked hard on this, I can tell. I love it, keep going. Very great write, my friend. I really like this. Keep it going, my friend.