Sorry *laugh*

Tear me up and mow me down

All this trouble only makes you frown

Kick my shin and break my crown

Now see how much I’ll wear you down

Reviews

[Blood_knight3000]

i enjoyed this short poem. The imagery is good and makes this a fun way to express the pain people go through, and the subtle need to take revege in one way or,another. You expressed you purpose clearly. Good job.

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Haha this is a funny but cute little poem.