I miss you

 

I had a dream of you,

and oh how I wish it was true,

 

You where alive again,

Laughing, love and singing,

like you always used to do,

 

Your favorite thing to play was Free Bird,

and thats what you where,

I would close my eyes,

and listen to the cords,

and your voice just as beautiful,

 

I still hear it in my mind,

I miss you so,

and its getting harder I find,

I wish you where here,

 

I shed a tear,

and toast you with my beer,

"To Jeremy Riddle, the best person

Ive met in years! Play on."

 

I wish I could hear you sing your song,

sitting on your bed,

you would play for so long,

 

But now I have to let go,

Your gone,

never to return,

but  I still hear you singing Free Bird,

I still hear you playing your song.

Author's Note

Play on Jeremy Play on RIP

Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A beautiful tribute for your friend. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I'm not sure what to say to this but a beautifully sweet and sentimental tribute to your friend... having lost someone years ago special to me that I still feel from time to time this touched me very deeply.

[Mr. Lopez]

I truly believe that our friends who pass have the ability to visit us in our dreams. I have had a similar kind of dream and i know the joy that i experienced when i woke. This poem is a nice tribute to a memory that will last a life time. Your friend lives on in your heart and in your poem. Great work !!

[~Poetik Bliss~]

Very beautiful heartfelt write Jess, may his memory never die, Keep it up hun, God bless

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Sad and heaetfelt, lovely flow and easy to follow. A touching write. Thank you for sharing.

[Dani California]

This is beautiful. It is of particular sadness to me as I have written several pieces very similar to this for my sister who was killed in a car accident several years ago.

"I still hear it in my mind,
I miss you so,
and its getting harder I find,
I wish you where here,"



Very well done Jessi..
An emotional heartfelt piece.